Tequille's essay was incredible well written. His character was interesting and different, which made you want to read keep on reading the essay. His character dual life is what makes the essay more dynamic. Even though she goes to UM by the day, Kecia has a nocturnal life pretty surprising. If I saw her on the streets, I would have no idea she works as a stripper. Besides, she has a reason for doing it. "The money is fast, I make more than an average women make in one night" and she tells it. It's impressive how her work doesn't disturb her from college. She even goes to class every morning. If I sleep later than 3:00 am, there's no way I can get to class. Well, sometimes I do, but I pay no attention.
Tequille's word choice is what makes it even better. He just puts the right words in there. His description about her dual life is what caughts the attention of the reader. Because I personally would believe a girl coming to UM and being a stripper. Even worse when he says that her GPA is 3.6. His description about her moves are so clear any one can imagine it. But, he doesn't make it sound vulgar. Instead, fine. He made an excellent job describing her, without judging her job. He made it sound as normal and "okay".
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